Peer Edit Jeff Curry

1. Go more in depth on some of the stuff that happened in the 2007 and 2008 seasons.

2. You could use the coaches for a source. Yes because it makes you want to find out what the difference is between a club team and a varsity team.

3. There really isn't a clear scene yet but you could easily add one now that you have provided background information. so you could talk about something that happens on a club team and how it is different from what happens on a varsity team.

4.You did a great job on the background information of the Eastview varsity team but in the next 300 words you need to add a scene about the difference in club and varsity lacrosse